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 # Educational Bitcoin videos
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-Welcome to educational Bitcoin videos. The purpose of this course is to provide an introduction to Bitcoin. It is divided into three bigger parts, each consisting of three or four smaller short videos. You can consume these videos easily when you have a bit of free time and rewatch them for better understanding.
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+Welcome to educational Bitcoin videos. The purpose of this course is to provide an introduction to Bitcoin. It is divided into three bigger parts, each consisting of three or four short videos. You can watch these videos easily when you have a bit of free time and rewatch them for better understanding.
 
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 # Part 1, Bitcoin analogies
 
-Bitcoin is unlike anything that has existed before, but from some points of
-view it is similar to things we are already familiar with. In this video some
-of these similarities are introduced and Bitcoin will be compared to things you
-already know.
+Bitcoin is special. While not identical to anything that has existed before, it can be thought of in concepts you are familiar with.
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 ## Bitcoin is like digital money